In the Rain: pg. 1: Zuko...?

MY FIRST COMIC PAGE!!!!! (Sorry about to weird dialog set up and if it sucks!)

This is the first page to my new comic "In the Rain". Which is an Avatar and Bleach crossover...I repeat...

THIS IS AN AVATARxBLEACH CROSSOVER!!!!!

"In the Rain" is based off of the most saddest Bleach moments in history... I just love KaienxRukia, so I decided to make a comic about it....AVATAR STYLE!!! Why? CAUSE ZUTARA REIGNS FOREVER!!

In this crossover, the characters are as such:

Katara as "Rukia Kuchiki"
Zuko as "Kaien Shiba"
Aang as "Ichigo Kurosaki"
Sokka as "Kisuke Urahara"
Ty Lee as "Yoruichi"
Toph as "Orihime Inoue"
Iroh as "Captain Ukitake"
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Okay in this scene, Zuko has just been taken over by a hollow, and Katara doesn't know yet. She's calls his name wondering why he's suddenly attacking so weird. Zuko turns to Katara asking what she wants, only for Katara to see that his eyes have blackened and his skin turned pale gray. She realizes he has become a hollow.

End of pg. 1. I LOVE THIS COMIC ALREADY!!!!